WWW: i really like how the colours match for example, the dark green title and her crop jumper. This makes the DPS more eye appealing. Also, the photo is fits in the genre of 90's RnB with how you styled the model.
EBI: place the pulled out quote somewhere else or change the font of the text. Also, its kinda hard to read the editorial because it looks a bit squash.
WWW: The model's outfit and look suits the music genre. The font for the masthead looks professional and eye catching.The bottom of the pages are filled in nicely.
EBI:You filled in the blank spaces. Maybe enlarge the picture and extend the article. Peer assessed by Fatema
Mario Testino Mario was born on October 30 1954 and was born in Peru in Lima, he wanted to discover the world of fashion and Hollywood, in...
WWW: i really like how the colours match for example, the dark green title and her crop jumper. This makes the DPS more eye appealing. Also, the photo is fits in the genre of 90's RnB with how you styled the model.
ReplyDeleteEBI: place the pulled out quote somewhere else or change the font of the text. Also, its kinda hard to read the editorial because it looks a bit squash.
WWW: The model's outfit and look suits the music genre. The font for the masthead looks professional and eye catching.The bottom of the pages are filled in nicely.
ReplyDeleteEBI:You filled in the blank spaces. Maybe enlarge the picture and extend the article.
Peer assessed by Fatema